EffortSometimes the poem slips
into my brain, twitches
my fingers until
I find a pen
and paper
and push it onto the page.
And sometimes I am Cave Woman.
I swing my club
wildly,
hope to find
it in the firelight,
to knock the words
unconscious
long enough to paint them
on the cave wall.
November 13, 2007
loving the cave woman imagery!
ReplyDeleteThat was lovely.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful contrast. Love it.
ReplyDeleteHeidi
I like the cave woman too!
ReplyDeleteIt was lovely...but it made me giggle too!
ReplyDeleteLove, love, love.
ReplyDeleteIsn't that the truth?!?
ReplyDeleteBeautiful.
That was beautiful. I'm feeling like the cave woman right now - half way through NaBloPoMo.
ReplyDeleteWonderful imagery. It's funny and clever, too.
ReplyDeleteperfect poem. loved it.
ReplyDeleteI came by late last night and read your poem and then again this morning. I can't help but feel like you are describing me - while I know you were not - you don't even know me. This is a good poem - it is perfect. Take care.
ReplyDeleteIt's a lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteAnd thanks for stopping by Feline Fine and saying hello.
I used to live in Germany years ago, BTW.
Kim
Amazing!!! Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteWhat a great poem! I can relate. :)
ReplyDeleteGreat poem. Great imagery.
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